Sunday, November 24, 2013

A piece of heaven

Somehow, someway, it was a lovely moment. A bunch of caring and thoughtful lads made my afternoon all so wonderful today. And that’s what got me writing this blog post now. 
They were seven, out in an open ground, playing together. They merrily tussled and tangled, making spontaneous laughter, like little chipmunks. And I could see smoke coming out from their mouths. That’s how cold it’s in Thimphu.

I sat in one corner and watched them. The way they play, tangle and converse reminded me of what was my childhood. I wanted to relive it, my childhood. Instantaneously, I joined them.

In no time at all, we became good friends. As the deep chill breeze stirred the bushes nearby, we kept on playing different games. Rope Swing in the beginning. Later on, seesaw. And finally a soccer game.
While playing the games, with these lads, sometimes I too acted like a kid. I became defiant. Fighting. And when we turned a little sour, we disagreed, becoming slightly bitter. However, these lads taught me that even if you become an adult (30s in my case), there’s still child-like nature in you. 

After our playtime, we talked intently, huddled together. I asked them about their dreams and ambitions. And it’s simply wonderful to enjoy the joy of sharing jokes and laughter with our future teacher, dasho, engineer and footballer. No one wanted to become writer, by the way.    

I bought them some snacks. “Thank you, Acho!” they expressed gratitude to me, grateful smile on their faces. In actuality, what I gave them was so little, yet for them, it meant lots.

Finally, we took a photo together. I kneeled down, hugged them. And quite shockingly, I felt their arms clasped my neck and back and they pulled me tight. It buoyed me. That is a piece of heaven for me.
I departed from them; however, I promised them that I will return next weekend. And as I walked back home I found myself hoping, Let their wishes be fulfilled.

11 comments:

  1. Being a child, there are no worries, no tension, no responsibilities. the only thing we know is enjoying the life with out most happiness with the friends unknown and sharing love with all.
    That is the joy of being a child and a great piece of Heaven.
    Sir, your description is peaceful and sweet piece of heaven too!!loved it.

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    1. In child and childhood memory, there's always a piece of innocence and joy. Thank you Kinley for dropping comment here.

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  2. You not only described the moment. You made us see it, through your writing. As much as you enjoyed, I too enjoyed through your post. It brought the fragments of childhood memories. It gave me the flashback. I went back, and relived it once again for a while. Beautiful!

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    1. It feels good to know that you also enjoyed this post. Happy me here. Keep writing lots and do study well, Monu.

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  3. instead of a piece of heaven, it could have been a piece of shit. What a rubbish. Totally wastage of time.

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  4. good writng....keep it up rikku

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  5. It is a nice piece to read. keep writing la and don't be discourage with the negativity of people's disposition. All the best.

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    1. I take this piece of advice from you. Thank you loads, Ashika.

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